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The Night's Talons
The night sinks its talons into the day
and draws blood, red along its horizons
from there rise grey black clouds
ominously potent in their smoke
the sound of thunder, sight of light
eclipsed
so full of power sets our imagination
our memories on fire as this great
bedspread in the sky shuts out the day
profound, omnipotent like God
our senses now reduced to thoughts
we feel the ground beneath, our souls
creep out from their deep sleeping places
and with ghosts our conscious minds
floating about in sounds, the peopled darkness
clicks and shakes, as birds move on their roosts
the branches fallen on the path
make cracks so sharp they echo back
the trees they whisper in the breeze
of nights like these from long ago
night moths make spectres buff and grey and send
their messages another way
from ours in rosy bowers
of nights cool flowers sup honeyed dreams,
not ours the cats set up their opera songs of love
in deep dark night
waking us up from sleep
the owl hoots and glides past, no sound, unseen,
moving the air on your cheek as his wings brush by
his mysterious flight a mouse squeaks and is eaten
the houses now like Christmas cards set up their fairy lights
with people moving round about in the dance of life like dice
with one hot drink to bed they sink into a stupor deep
now black still bubble and quietly glide
towards the never ending sea that joins the sky at last
infinity the void of space where stars make points of light
foxes roam while we're at home and dogs create a fuss
badgers waddle out of holes their sharp teeth snapping food
while in the sky the acrobats those bats that fly like papers black
now cleared of cloud, abide a host that's always
there the intangible black velvet gown of night
that frowns it darkness down on hill and town
and all we know is covered out of sight.
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 11 months ago
Long ago, when I first
Ravenshakti
16 years 11 months ago
Like a journey to Enchantment...
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
Oh Hello you black bird
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Ann,
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
You are absolutely right Nina
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Margaret Ann,
Ink Dragon
16 years 11 months ago
Ann,
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
I will
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Ann
greeneyes
16 years 10 months ago
im in awe