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Reminiscences
The clouds form pictures in 3D again
and images of happy days they bring
There used to be no need to point back then
our hands entwined, I needed no prompting
when you said softly See the dragon there?
and when I whispered Over there, a whale!
you spotted it and never asked me Where?
Those beloved shadows, like a faded tale
now rise, love and friendship surface once more
The fun we had, each moment was a lark
just you and I in on the joke, our lore
like artfully painting walls in the dark
on the spot rhyming and nonsense we talked
puns that puzzled the uninitiated
beyond communication our words had walked
through looks and winks, crucial things were stated
We challenged fate with a defiant gaze
and put life’s labyrinthine course to shame
till we got lost in a mascara maze
did your hand slip from mine, was I to blame?
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Candlewitch
16 years 10 months ago
I Love The...
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Cat,
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
Spectactular Nina I loved it
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16 years 10 months ago
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16 years 10 months ago
Chuck,
Gerry
16 years 10 months ago
Two lives happily
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16 years 10 months ago
Gerry,
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16 years 10 months ago
hi
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16 years 10 months ago
Ash,
Bonitaj
16 years 10 months ago
This piece is rivetting!
Ink Dragon
16 years 10 months ago
Boni,
Ink Dragon
16 years 9 months ago
Goethe's words:
Bonitaj
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you for this Nina!