NEVER LEAVE

I thought the title was a little confusing. There is no refrence to leaving or parting. Maybe if you called it "A Walk of Companions" or "Steps of Friendship". I also thought that [A dialog of two friends, void of lies] needs better mechanics to read properly. [I like the line, just not the presentation.] Language use is good and internal logic and pacing are fine. It begins and ends with an idea both asked and answered. My comments are just that, but in answer to to the questions you asked. I am just begining to see that people really want critisim and constructive comments and not just praise. [Although it is nice to get positive feedback] After all, these are our babies! Good work, Press. -- Respectfully yours, Gee.