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Jun 30, 2009
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blinded
bloodshot, i pulled my eyes open
this morning, like a wound interrupted,
failing to bridge a network of skin
should have been a gentle gesture
you would never believe violence
could translate
quickly i crumpled back behind
those shields of eyelids,
i had done my seeing, enough
for the month, more than the year,
i thought of what kind of creature sharks are
born to never close their eyes,
it made perfect sense why
they are
carniverous
and always moving.
this morning, like a wound interrupted,
failing to bridge a network of skin
should have been a gentle gesture
you would never believe violence
could translate
quickly i crumpled back behind
those shields of eyelids,
i had done my seeing, enough
for the month, more than the year,
i thought of what kind of creature sharks are
born to never close their eyes,
it made perfect sense why
they are
carniverous
and always moving.
— whitetea, Jun 30, 2009
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faerybeki
16 years 11 months ago
Ouch!