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....Thy will be done on earth....
Pollution, disintegration, trepidation,
World wide manipulation: doom and gloom
No shrewdness, rightness, lucidity, tranquillity.
Sanctification, Pacification, completion,
Lawful, legal champion: just and true
No badness, prejudice, bigotry, inequity.
Meditation, admiration, revelation,
Spiritual elation: darkness to light.
No starkness, slyness, futility, aridity.
Declaration, resolutions, restoration,
Physical satisfaction: freed of greed.
No stinginess, smugness, cruelty, voracity.
Elation, jubilation, a new creation,
Mental relaxation: relief from grief.
No madness, sadness, insanity, uncertainty.
Globalization, revivification, perfection,
Promised realization: fought and won.
Yes! godliness, gladness: harmony eternally.
Critiques
faerybeki
17 years ago
Yes! Let us all get here.
mand
17 years ago
Hi Faerbeki
Candlewitch
17 years ago
Hello
mand
17 years ago
Hi Cat
weirdelf
17 years ago
I dance nimbly around your pyre
mand
17 years ago
Hi Jess
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