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....Thy will be done on earth....

 

Pollution, disintegration, trepidation,   

World wide manipulation: doom and gloom

No shrewdness, rightness, lucidity, tranquillity.

 

Sanctification, Pacification, completion,

Lawful, legal champion: just and true          

No badness, prejudice, bigotry, inequity.

 

Meditation, admiration, revelation,

Spiritual elation: darkness to light.   

No starkness, slyness, futility, aridity.

 

Declaration, resolutions, restoration,

Physical satisfaction: freed of greed. 

No stinginess, smugness, cruelty, voracity.

 

Elation, jubilation, a new creation,

Mental relaxation: relief from grief.

No madness, sadness, insanity, uncertainty. 

 

Globalization, revivification, perfection, 

Promised realization: fought and won.

Yes! godliness, gladness: harmony eternally.

 

 

— mand, Jun 30, 2009

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mand

mand

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Faerbeki

Thank you for reading and commenting and I agree with your sentiments, relief from grief. I hope to read some of your work in the not to distant future. Love Mand
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Hello

Good title, and your pacing is good, as is your language useage. I liked the message and agree with faerybeki's opinion. Always, Cat
mand

mand

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Cat

Thanks Cat, I appreciate your comments, I'm away for the next few days but when I get back I'll read more of your poetry - which I really enjoy reading. Keep safe and happy Mand
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 11 months ago

I dance nimbly around your pyre

excitng, chaotic, entrancing, inducing, I dive in. Only one word strikes ajar her, in context. profanity. what is that? seems wrong to compare to madness, sadness, insanity since it is a moral thing. My only quibble, and not enough to stop a 5, but I suggest you consider it. Cheers, Jess
mand

mand

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Jess

Thank you for your kind comments. You have given me something to think about, I'll do that while I'm away. back in a week. live long and prosper. Mand