Edge (For Cat)

Tantalizing treachery
he walks in darkness
Total terrifying truth

— infinite_dwarf, Jun 30, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

Critiques

Candlewitch

17 years ago

=0

Great haiku/senryu! But could I possibly be prejudiced because it is about my alter-ego? (maybe a bit) It certainly captures the essence of "Edge." Thank you so much for this, it really made my day! Always, cat

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

smiles

Anything for you, my dear kitty cat. What did Edge think? ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Flying so high, trying to remember How many cigarettes did I bring along? When I get down, I'll jump in a taxi-cab Driving through London-town to cry you a song..." - Jethro Tull

Candlewitch

17 years ago

Edge...

swallowed it down and licked his lips... delicious! Always, Cat (except for when I'm not, lol!)

orgami

17 years ago

enjoyable cat Hiaku

well tried to make a cat with symbols but nothing worked wait nope not clever enough yet Like this very much~

Candlewitch

17 years ago

LOL

>{^*;*^}< a spaced out cat

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

ya, there you go!

~Jess K. ----------------------- "Flying so high, trying to remember How many cigarettes did I bring along? When I get down, I'll jump in a taxi-cab Driving through London-town to cry you a song..." - Jethro Tull

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

Thanks, Steven

^ ^ . . > < LOL! Apparently neither am I, but I appreciate your vision all the same. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Flying so high, trying to remember How many cigarettes did I bring along? When I get down, I'll jump in a taxi-cab Driving through London-town to cry you a song..." - Jethro Tull

Ink Dragon

17 years ago

Jess,

I always love your Japanese poems, you are cracking good at them. I daresay that you have nailed "Edge" here... Yummy dark poem, gulped it down, forgot to chew ;) Yours, ~Nina

infinite_dwarf

17 years ago

Thankyou, Nina

It's one of the structures I almost understand! LOL I'm glad 'Edge' came through well - he seems to be quite the elusive character. Thanks for stopping in. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Why worry? There should be laughter after pain. There should be sunshine after rain. These things have always been the same. So why worry now?" - Dire Straits

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