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Jun 29, 2009
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baptism
the river Jordan flows
into the sea
i have met countless
John-the-Baptists
i have met many a
Pontius Pilate
but it is always
Judas
whom i shall
love,
who else shall
baptise me
when the last
veil of me
red like the setting
sun,
is torn to shreds
and I stand there,
ashamed.
~A
into the sea
i have met countless
John-the-Baptists
i have met many a
Pontius Pilate
but it is always
Judas
whom i shall
love,
who else shall
baptise me
when the last
veil of me
red like the setting
sun,
is torn to shreds
and I stand there,
ashamed.
~A
— Kailashana, Jun 29, 2009
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Seren
17 years ago
Anna this is so beautifully
Kailashana
17 years ago
I laugh…. WHERE do they
Seren
17 years ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years ago
heheheh. 2 days later, and
Seren
17 years ago
Poetry is sometimes all life is
Candlewitch
17 years ago
=0
Kailashana
17 years ago
Thanks Cat, i love your
orgami
17 years ago
thirty peices
Kailashana
17 years ago
Can you imagine being Judas,
Nordic cloud
17 years ago
This is a good image
Kailashana
17 years ago
Betrayal… without
bjp
17 years ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
17 years ago
Perfect love asks no
faerybeki
17 years ago
Anna, this carries so much
Kailashana
17 years ago
How beautifully you put
faerybeki
17 years ago
A poem, EH? x
Cloudthings
17 years ago
why should we not take our own baptism shed the shame beside the
Kailashana
17 years ago
We speak from the same
Arrow
17 years ago
I hate to keep coming by only to say
Kailashana
17 years ago
Always straight to the
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Hi Ana
Kailashana
17 years ago
We all play our roles out,
Tam the Chanter
17 years ago
baptism
Kailashana
17 years ago
Thank you Ian. That was my
paparazii
17 years ago
Very good
Kailashana
17 years ago
Thank you. And here i
themoonman
17 years ago
Anna...
Kailashana
17 years ago
Thank you for gracing my
weirdelf
17 years ago
goddess, dance with me
Kailashana
17 years ago
Bow. Shameless, we dance
Quillsvein1
17 years ago
Beautiful poem
Kailashana
17 years ago
I respect immensely your
Quillsvein1
17 years ago
Well
bjp
17 years ago
Dear guillsvein1,
Quillsvein1
17 years ago
I'm just not
weirdelf
17 years ago
Who cares about the historical accuracy of Jesus?
Kailashana
17 years ago
Thank you, also. As we are
Ink Dragon
17 years ago
Anna,
Kailashana
17 years ago
Baptism…. is an immersion
Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
This is quite profound
Kailashana
17 years ago
No need to bow beautiful
Eduardo Cruz
17 years ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years ago
I’m pleasantly surprised,
Tam the Chanter
17 years ago
baptism
Kailashana
17 years ago
Yes!!!!! I accept my
DarkinAZ
17 years ago
Well I agree with Quills.....
Kailashana
17 years ago
Ahhh. you have
DarkinAZ
17 years ago
I just urge you to read 2
Kailashana
17 years ago
This?1 Corinthians 2 10
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