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michael
Jun 29, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Was Thinking of You

I was remembering your sweet voice,


And oh, how I did rejoice.

I was reflecting on your beautiful eyes,

As well as how they made me cry.

I was recalling your wonderful smile.

Also how myself you do beguile.

I was dreaming about you,

But wished my dream would come true.

I was calling to mind how you make me feel,

In addition to your sex appeal.

I was memorising your shapely figure,

Furthermore, your enthusiastic vigour.

I was picturing all the things you do,

Really I was just thinking of you.

   
— michael, Jun 29, 2009

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Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

I was thinking of you

Looser Well my friend meet me the biggest looser ever. My heart full of love tossed aside again and again. I am haunted by the love of my life, the only love for me his voice his smile those piercing eyes melts my heart away So distant he stays, I'm a million miles away even if i am standing next to him, he is elsewhere so you see my friend the looser I am so full of dispair Electric blue
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Tink

16 years 11 months ago

"L", as promised...

I enjoyed this one very much. I do like the way you phrased it and matched it with rhyme. Bravo! And in honesty, to me, this one tugged more on my heart strings and meant more than the other one in it power and impact. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink