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RAIN

Rain Mmmmmmmm  I know this well. 

I cry a lot as I walk in the rain, as no one can see my free falling tears.
That I wear on the outside as well as within.

The ocean's I cry these days, with nothing to look forward too.
Just at a stand still.

On a bridge I stand, over a small stream. My tears fall freely below.
Into the stream to flow on regardless, to meander. 
Travel to parts unknown.  That's me.

The sun comes out my tears evapourate.
Clouds form from my tears to free fall,
again from above.  The circle of
life continues. But why do I?


Electric blue lonesome blue, so blue

— Electric Blue, Jun 29, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

((((((((((((hugz))))))))))

First off cause I think you need one ... Blue this broke my heart to read but a great write hun ... Love Jayne x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Rain

Jayne Thank you my friend. Hugs are very few and far between I am guilty of nothing but love in the first degree I need a big long hug from just one that will last for ever. but so distant this seems out of reach at this time But I will never give up on the love of my life. Such longing have I but unrequitted at this time Maybe miracles may happen. Electric Blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Blue friend never give up

Blue friend never give up for you never know miracles do happen I believe enough for us both huni ... you just keep the light burning and he will see your brillant blue flames through the mist and find you ... hope lives (hugz) love Jayne x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 11 months ago

Rain

My Friend Well in the mist we seem to be maybe my blue flames will be the guiding light. and lead the spirit back to the heart that awaits. As I am guilty of love in the first degree. My blue flame wants to run wild and free who knows what will be will be Electric blue
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Maggie

I pray that you get your miracle! Always, Cat
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orgami

16 years 11 months ago

just wrote another rain poem also

but im just walking about going no where I didnt know you cried in the rain to have that release of the soul to be able to surface that i love bridges all the effort work I should repost that one pic again far away in thought sad always in some respect some level Hugs to you Blue and your grand rain poem
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 10 months ago

Rain

Org Crying is something I seem to do a lot lately. Left all alone cast aside like velveteen Rabbit waiting for the magic again of Mohogany Cave. Dreams memories and promises made are all I have left. So I walk the lonely streets in the late or early hours no one around to see me crying in the rain. Electric blue so lonesome tearfull blue