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Spanish Moss

Spanish Moss

The ancient weathered oaks
standing stately and proud
with gray Spanish Moss
worn like a shroud
on their stout reaching branches
spread wide as in a benediction

The old weathered hacienda,
now stands neglected and tattered,
where once it teemed with life
with a bold orange-tiled roof

If you look closely at the trees
As the wind sighs softly through the leaves
You can see the shadow children,
hear their laughter and joyous cries

Vacant windows, now with bare, blind eyes
set in walls that still bleed love
stare at overgrown fields
standing with grain long gone to seed.

Gone now are those days of grace
just shades of a past now lost
that flicker in and out
of limbs thick with Spanish Moss

The ancient weathered oaks
standing stately and proud
with gray Spanish Moss
worn like a shroud
on their stout reaching branches
spread wide as in a benediction


About 5 miles from where I live there is a Spanish style house that has been vacant for over 30 years. It was built soon after I came here and I used to drive by and see kids playing in the old oak trees. A couple of years later it was vacant and has been vacant ever since. No one seems to know whaere the people went. They were just gone one day. The property and house are still there, but it is overgrown and lifeless and since it is in the county and a goodly ways from neighboring houses nothing has been done to it. I have ofter thought about trying to find out who owns it, but then I like the mystery of it also.
Rett
— Rett, Jun 29, 2009

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 11 months ago

Rett

Know the sight well! Everything left unattended in Virginia eventually was overtaken by kudzu. This poem did a nice job of bringing those type pictures to mind. Careful - there may be spooks in that house. =) ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Flying so high, trying to remember How many cigarettes did I bring along? When I get down, I'll jump in a taxi-cab Driving through London-town to cry you a song..." - Jethro Tull
Rett

Rett

16 years 11 months ago

Ah Jess, I know the feeling

Growing up in Mississippi and traveling through Arkansas and Tennessee along with Alabama and Georgia I have seen my share of Kudzu. Anthing that grows a foot or more a day is ridiculous! *G* ooooeeeeeoooooo spooks! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." Rett
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 11 months ago

I like your shadow children

I LOVE old trees and oaks are so wonderfully devious, twisting and turning as they rise and give us an umbrella of wisdom, where the owls like to roost where the squirrels play and under which the badgers have their homes; children climb or swing from them and they represent the Olde England of the past; Scotland too, and 'they' say a very long time ago there were giant tall oaks in Nordic lands too. Many a poem or tale has been told beneath or using the oak. The old derelict house, how fascinatingly surrealist they can be, our imagination set going in many ways, the garden becoming its own paradise and the house peopled with rats and mice, birds and insects it becomes a menagerie of another kind. Yours is a romantic one whereas some in say Derbyshire, in the Peaks, with their empty black windows staring in the dakr foggy landscape can make shivers go down ones back. I like your shadow children, I wonder who they are? I like your story here Rett Yours as aye Ann of Norway
Rett

Rett

16 years 11 months ago

Much obliged Ann

As you know, I love old buildings. The older the better and when they are abandoned and aged they seem to develop a character that is so unique. I can't help but look at them and wonder what went before. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." Rett
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Rett

This sounds like the makings of a Stephen King novel. Empty houses, especially big ones with big oak trees are the making of some kind of story. And it is weird that a new house was suddenly left abandoned. You really need to get to the bottom of this one. 'You can see the shadow children,' I especially liked that line. Yours, Deelilah
Rett

Rett

16 years 11 months ago

Deelilah, thank you

No one in the area seems to know where the people went, whether any family is left or not, but no one has liveed there in ages. It is overgrown, but I guess I should see if someone is still paying property taxes on it. Sometimes though, the mystery is the best part of it. *S* Glad you liked it my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." Rett