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Jun 29, 2009
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love-proofed
Cascade premium glass, full of sambooka
see through, clear, crystal clear
harboring evil.
The world’s most notorious serial killer,
has not killed as many people.
Bullets breaking sound barriers,
forcing tears to war bitten faces,
have not killed as many people.
There are war widows
cancer sufferers
vietnam vets.
There’s been tears, oh yes
frostbitten, see through.
In every corner
of a globe
spherical.
There’s a man
near death
love-proofed.
see through, clear, crystal clear
harboring evil.
The world’s most notorious serial killer,
has not killed as many people.
Bullets breaking sound barriers,
forcing tears to war bitten faces,
have not killed as many people.
There are war widows
cancer sufferers
vietnam vets.
There’s been tears, oh yes
frostbitten, see through.
In every corner
of a globe
spherical.
There’s a man
near death
love-proofed.
— bloke, Jun 29, 2009
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Candlewitch
17 years ago
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bloke
17 years ago
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17 years ago
Bloke,
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