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love-proofed

Cascade premium glass, full of sambooka 
see through, clear, crystal clear
harboring evil.
The world’s most notorious serial killer,
has not killed as many people.
Bullets breaking sound barriers,
forcing tears to war bitten faces,
have not killed as many people.
There are war widows
cancer sufferers
vietnam vets.
There’s been tears, oh yes
frostbitten, see through.
In every corner
of a globe
spherical.
There’s a man
near death
love-proofed.
— bloke, Jun 29, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Hello

Your poem aroused my attention with your interesting subject matter. The title is very clever, in my opinion, it strikes my sense of perversity. Always, Cat
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bloke

16 years 11 months ago

cat

thank you cat, glad to see the title hit you the way i meant it too.
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Tink

16 years 11 months ago

Bloke,

the title is what grabbed my attention and was surprised by the nature of the poem, a good surprise. this is an interesting topic and the more i think about your words, the more impact they have on me. well done. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink