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Fleur MacDonald
Fleur MacDonald
Jul 01, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Little Theatre...

The play is good,
really good.
Percy, very shy
Cyrenne, a prostitute
and Ricky, a rough one.
set in the 1960's
on a one night stand.
Gold curtains
black stage
spotlight on the stairs.
A cool breeze
slipping through a
small crack of the 
slightly opened windows.
A single Theatre programme
lying crumpled on the floor...

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 10 months ago

oh dear oh my

this is one of those poems I adore but can't tell you why... it just works. Certainly I was bored by the first 10 lines and the last 6 transformed it. Cheers, Jess
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

I agree, it’s like a fresh

I agree, it's like a fresh wonderful breeze floating in unannounced with some words, scattering somewhere inside me... hell if i know which program to refer to. ;-) ~A "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin