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Jun 28, 2009
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night
i collapse
into night's embrace
i unfold
into nothing
my daydreams
are over...
our affair
has just begun.
into night's embrace
i unfold
into nothing
my daydreams
are over...
our affair
has just begun.
— Kailashana, Jun 28, 2009
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Seren
17 years ago
Anna this is breathlessly
leonard daranjo
17 years ago
Anna
RobertKnott
16 years 11 months ago
There is much beauty in
doorman
16 years 11 months ago
This one is a real pearl,
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