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Jun 28, 2009
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Commencing in Me (the road to Devon was paved with good intentions)
Rolling along
passed pockets
of still yellow seas
Patchwork land
of multitudinous greens
Emerald blanket
stitched by hedge
Trees
standing
sentinel
these butterflies
in my tummy
are divinity's flutterings
universal utterings
goosebump evidence
of connection
those birds
are flying on my skybound dreams
floating on my intention
to embrace the silence
no, not silence, but
the calm perfection of sound
The change starts here
on this coastal road
by ocean view
near sea of sparkling glory blue
It starts now
it begins instantly
commencing in me
passed pockets
of still yellow seas
Patchwork land
of multitudinous greens
Emerald blanket
stitched by hedge
Trees
standing
sentinel
these butterflies
in my tummy
are divinity's flutterings
universal utterings
goosebump evidence
of connection
those birds
are flying on my skybound dreams
floating on my intention
to embrace the silence
no, not silence, but
the calm perfection of sound
The change starts here
on this coastal road
by ocean view
near sea of sparkling glory blue
It starts now
it begins instantly
commencing in me
— faerybeki, Jun 28, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
17 years ago
Beki !!!! welcome back we have all missed you ...
faerybeki
17 years ago
Jayne, I missed you too,
paparazii
17 years ago
Lovely n welcome back
faerybeki
17 years ago
Ndatenda Ephy, it was a
Maribel Nassia
17 years ago
Inspiring
faerybeki
17 years ago
Maribel Nassia, what a fab
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