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Jun 27, 2009
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Feathered Thought
Tranquil thoughts
breathing
of slow kissed sights
comforted
in expelling this light
languorous trembled gaze
A mask promising nothing
yet yearning to taste
now pushed aside
Risking this pull
stakes everything
Claims made
forever washing
though tears of ecstasy
now rolling free of
ducted bliss
trailed warmth of
cored beings
exquisite dripping
yets
Serenades of wanting
traveling through blood
as feather breathes
brushed lightness
thieves strength
floating in
washes of joyed right
Unaltered and bare
lured to charm
unhooked to potent need
she is lost
Silkily softness crushed in satin
drawn to slither tight
set free to embrace
crystal screams
shattered
in feathers graced might
Masked
to be nothing
revealed
in breathlessness
— Seren, Jun 27, 2009
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Fleur MacDonald
17 years ago
I swear
Seren
17 years ago
Awwwww Fleur
Candlewitch
17 years ago
=)
Seren
17 years ago
Cat my Darling friend ...
Candlewitch
17 years ago
awww
Seren
17 years ago
Bigger ones back at you
doorman
16 years 11 months ago
Seren
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Espen
lyz
16 years 11 months ago
Seren.
Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Lyz ...
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