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The Recurring Theme

 the recurring theme
runs
as strategic beams of
                curve before
  the engendered
androgynous sunrise
wishe (s) to deny

masculine
feminine                  GG
withal the peace
that apprehends
the apprension
   little cliches
   rise and fall (s)
dances upon their dancings
and serration
     serration.
— sumsum22, Jun 27, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

Not altogether...

Not altogether sure where you were going with this...I think that it is about the little dances that occur between the sexes. I don't wish to destroy you, and have no intention of trying. I am far more interested in trying to decipher the meaning of this poem. It certainly is interesting, to say the least. Please let me know what you were trying to to tell us. I AM interested. Gee.
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sumsum22

16 years 11 months ago

Hey Buddy

Hey Gee, I know you aren't trying to hurt me. its my denial of gender roles in todays society- something i wrote a small paper on and was actually yelled at by a few people that disliked it for its message. I had an opinion, I gave reasons, etc. basically, the poem is my continued effort to be headstrong in a world where conformity is accepted. as individualistic as America is today, we sure put a lot of emphasis on being similar. Strange. oh, and thank you for reading, good friend. your input is always appreciated! :) your friend in poetry, Bryan
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

Hey Buddy...

Gender roles are hard to apprise these days. There is a tendency to stick with what was once the norm. I think that many people are confused about who is what, and how to identify themselves. This is not uncommon, amongst the older crowd especially. I try to be open to change, and not get stagnant. I did not see your piece about gender roles, so I cannot say what it was that people disagreed with or what may have offended them. You have to realise that some people are stuck with the mind set that they were raised with. I have trouble with the idea that it is o.k. or even the right thing to do, when the people in my neighborhood shoot each other over stupid bull-shit like you owe me for a twenty dollar bag of dope, or you looked at me or my girlfriend wrong, or some other type of B.S. like: This is my turf and you are wearing the wrong color bandanna. They however, are being raised/not being raised by people whose idea of parenting is making sure that they get as much money from welfare as they possibly can, so as to buy their children hundred dollar sneakers to wear while running from the cops. [I really don't understand how they expect to get away with their pants hanging off the crack of their ass, and falling down around their knees.] I could go on and rant about the way society is exacerbating our problems by letting people deny liability for their actions, but..... Anyways, always glad to comment and show my appreciation for the people who are like you. I would not worry about the few that are so stuck in the ways that are so set that they seem as though in concrete. Your friend always, Gee. P.S. Do you know what happened to Dawning Daytripper? I know she had some issuses with the site, but she has not contacted me as she promised she would, to let me know what is going on with her.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

yes, please do.

Yes, please do and tell her that I miss her. Now I have a reason to use my-space! I have only just joined and don't get around on it very well, but I will try and utilize it to keep in touch with her. Or she can get my e-mail address from you,[ I will P.M. it to you. Thank you, Gee.
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 9 months ago

I emailed you like 14 times,

It must have been in your spam or something. CAUSE I DID. Nor did you find me on myspace! AND I gave my address to Kelsey for you. AND to top it off aren't you SWEET for asking!! Sorry SumSum, I liked the read. It's been so long since I been home, it feels cozy. I know that was not your intention, but works for me. As far as gender roles... I don't have a clue. I think hormones are a big part. Screw form if it looks right to you! Sum- time's it works, and Sum- times it don't. Yeah silly, but hilarious. D.D.
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sumsum22

16 years 11 months ago

hi :)

Meow is actually a part of the last words sections. I had something else written there, but I deleted it and put meow in...for no reason. the GG and other random stuff is just part of how i feel that the poem should look. Thank you so much for your comments, Kelsey, they are very much appreciated. your friend in poetry, Bryan
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sumsum22

16 years 10 months ago

sorryguys

there was a mini-break in- someone else wrote the comment above this- a "friend" of mine. I thought that I could erase comments, but I can't. anyways, I apologize if the comment bothered any of you guys. Bryan