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Jun 26, 2009
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Another Path
This road that we share
Filled with twists and turns
Brings passengers to their knees
As they see a world best forgotten
So far from their destination
They somehow keep on their voyage
Winters become colder and bitter
Prairies turn into abandoned cities
Oh but they keep on their journey
Is it pride one may ask themselves
No it is a distorted glimpse of faith
Left in the veins of all of us
A hope that seems to slowly grow
Caught in the webs of despair
They seek no pity from anyone
For the road they choose is
Not one that is easy to forget
It is a road we seem to take daily
One that makes boys into men
The one that makes the weak stronger
If this road had not been taken
Then imagine where you would be?
— paul, Jun 26, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
16 years 11 months ago
Paul
Apostolos "Pau…
16 years 11 months ago
thx yoyu
weirdelf-test
16 years 8 months ago
this is wonderful, passionate intelligent poetry