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Solitary traveler



dense is the cloudthat covers my spiritheavy are the lidsthat cover my eyescold is the hand that touches my hearthurried are the thoughtsthat scamper through my mindslow are my stepstired and worndark is the colourthat stains my soul 

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Leonardo

This was like taking steps into despair very sad write ... Powerful though ... Love Jayne x x
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leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

Thank you Jayne

Yes, these are the steps of despair that I sometimes experience. I sometimes wonder about the purpose and meaning of life. Leonard
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Taniaspoetry

16 years 10 months ago

walk on

although your steps are tired and worn every warrior that stays with the good fight lives through doubt that stains his soul every warrior that climbs uphill knows that every breathless, heavy step takes him above the clouds towards the light that calls from the pinnacle Deeply lovely poem Leonard With best wishes Tania
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bjp

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Leonard,

I so like this poem. It is definitionally human. And the more one finds commonality within the tribes, the more one has reached my feelings of success. We are all uncertain. It is the effect of our complexity, our paradoxes. It is that thing which is at the centre of Nixon's silence of the majority and causes the quite desperation of which commentator's speak. And you have owned to it, which has the beauty of invitation. I do so like this poem. Brian
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leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

Thank you Brian

We are definitely bundles of contradictions. Judging from the way I feel: sometimes elated, sometimes futile and despairing. I quite like the expression "Nixon's Silence". Can you just throw some light on it, Thanks again for the discerning read. Leonard
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bjp

16 years 10 months ago

Dear Leonard,

I will give the long answer. I have slightly amended a reference of Nixon's: "the silent majority" to the silence of the majority. Nixon was besieged by protests against continuing the Vietnam war. Because he had concerns about the United States "losing" its first war, as well as aspects of "domino theory", he insisted on negotiating "peace with honour." And because the North Vietnamese were slow to offer the "honour", Nixon widened the war by authorizing the illegal bombing of Laos and Cambodia, there the roads bringing logistics from North Vietnam to the South were located. This bombing led, in part, to the unauthorized release of the Pentagon Papers, a secret History of the Vietnam War written in part by members of the Rand Corporation. That history was not favourable to the U.S. administration's public accounts of the war and its release gave full vent to Nixon's sense of paranoid embattlement. He created the "Plumbers" to curtail such leaks, and then used them in the political arena against the Democrats. It was Plumbers caught in the National Offices of the Democratic Party in the Watergate Hotel which began the series of steps to Nixon's bitter end as President. But while President, and attempting to resist the pressure for a "dishonourable" end to the war, he, or his writers, invented the term "the silent majority" to bolster his position with the support of Americans who were not showing any support... the silent majority who he claimed were in his corner. Brian
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leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

Thank you Brian

For your most lucid explanation. I was blissfully unaware of this. Thanks once again. I enjoy reading your comments. Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Solitary traveler

Leonard, a great piece here. I would leave off [and] 10th line I could be wrong, I think traveler is spelled with one "L" Enjoyed this so much~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

Here you are again

With your unstinting support. You are right: one "L" and "and" shall be thrown. Thanks for pointing out the error and the suggestion. Leonard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Leonard

I have to be nit-pickey, because your poems are so good, I have to look for slight errors, for perfection, Leonard! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

And thank you for that Janice

I am always open to your suggestions because you yourself are a very good poet. I am honoured that you should feel the way you do about the way I write. One more thing - the second last line - I changed "doubt" to "dark" Always ... Leonard
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Doubt leaves a hole in the

Doubt leaves a hole in the heart big enough to let worlds fall through. Well done Leonard. You have cracked open the light. (Leonard Cohen ~ "There's a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in". Much love. "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin
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leonard daranjo

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks Anna

It's such a pleasure having you around. The quote by Leonard Cohen - one of my favourite poets/song writers - is really cool. I also love his lines: If I have been unkind I hope you can just let it go by If I have been untrue I hope you know it was never to you I think it is from Suzanne. Thanks once again Anna. Leonard
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Pandemonium

16 years 10 months ago

Stained by your poem. It

Stained by your poem. It begins to irk you from the first line. Really liked the poem!