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Infatuation or C

 

Infatuation or Co....ation

 

Oh what succour 

what a wonderful woman you are

you give me breath, life

and a home so blest by love

I know of none so great

so overflowing on my plate

my staff stands tall

and longs to sail the seas

of your fine essences 

the breeze that lifts my trousers

high and blows all cares awry

for loving you the way I do

is such ecstasy anew

no further far and more

I plunge to fall in love with you

to penetrate the deeps of your abyss

I gratefully sink into this

your womb of life's beginning

not of the gods deemed sinning

but wonder, myth, the bliss of this

is far more worth the winning

oh sighs and cries and oh!

as my mind flies in lips of wine

in solace fine I dine entwined

that epitome of feminine

the heaven's descend and condescend

to grant me this, a vision

beauty beyond the thoughts of gaining

yet you are now 

and I in my thrawn state must bow

to thee my goddess

clouds do part

to let the art of words flood out

the light that kindles life is gushing

into life's cave of worth

creating

yes creating life

and causing

love's rebirth



 


— Nordic cloud, Jun 23, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Anna,

This is a poem fat with excellence. It is like a spinning top, brushed by the hand to fast speeds, hastening, hastening.... Half way, and the spinning is sustained, climbing fences, wading bogs: but wonder, myth, the bliss of this is far more worth the winning oh sighs and cries and oh! as my mind flies in lips of wine in solace fine I dine entwined that epitome of feminine the heaven’s descend and condescend to grant me this, a vision beauty beyond the thoughts of gaining yet you are now and I in my thrawn state must bow to thee my goddess clouds do part to let the art of words flood out the light that kindles life is gushing into life’s cave of worth creating yes creating life and causing love’s rebirth You have taken the ascendancy of place, initiative and even apparent gender. But men's fears are often in large part due to their respectful understanding of women's capacity, in thought and deed, emotion and withholding, love and sorrow. This is a powerful poem. One of your very best. It is also spiced. Salvia officinalis, sage by other name, posing and sometimes answering ripening questions, Crocus sativus, our saffron, licking upon unseen paws, and Wasabia japonica, like radish, hot and unquenchable. Brian
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

It flows, it spirals, it

It flows, it spirals, it sips, it devours, it cleanses, it refreshes, it sinks into oblivion, it begs no question for harmony is the key of life. Sweet! ~A "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

The Queen Reigns!

Your Magnificence! I am enthralled, by your voice....the one I hear now. How could I have missed the passion in you? I walk on my knees in your presence! Stately, you have made the statement,and proclaimed yourself in the male personification! Yet... as properly as your stature permits. I have discovered your elegance anew! Yours Respectfully,Sir Gee.
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 11 months ago

Hello Ann! An overwhelmingly

Hello Ann! An overwhelmingly beautiful piece. what sealed it for me was this! "for loving you the way I do is such ecstasy anew no further far and more I plunge to fall in love with you to penetrate the deeps of your abyss" Universal, beckoning, splendid depiction of LOVE! Thank you from lovers everywhere! Bonita j