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As always rest thee in my hand a warmth,
a skin as rich to smell as to my touch,
and to my eye an evergreen delight,
as close thy whorls of mystery unfold
and thou art known again as thee unique.

With softened mouth against thy rigid tip
I suck again the changing taste of thee
and deem thy nearly silent sigh and gasp
acceptance of my worship of thy heat.
But stay thee now and be not soon consumed.

Thy curves and folds still unexplored be;
and night still young leaves time for subtle probes.

Attend with me the clutter of the day,
In patient stillness let me finish tasks
Too urgent now---and strident nags indeed.
I will return to thee without delay;
Within me, too, thy glowing embers burn.

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Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

16 years 10 months ago

Nice, and subtly funny

And an excellent entry to the September contest, if you skinny it down by 74 characters. After all, a love poem to a beverage (green tea?) is a great twist. Now, how to prune 74 characters? Stanza 3. Nice image, nice foreshadowing, but not essential to the poem. This was a great read and the skilled use of pentameter blank verse to address the non-traditional subject matter was a great idea. Damn boy, you brought a happy spot to my day! --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 10 months ago

Jonathan, you're too clever by half!

Indeed, the contest served to spark this thing off---I abandoned contest considerations in the writing, however, as the thing seemed to have a proper length somewhat greater than the contest's constraints allowed. And that was a damnably good guess about my object of worship. Only slightly wrong: I had in mind a very nice squat pot pipe, with an oval stem, by Royal Danish. It had a particularly fine bird's-eye cut that I spent dozens of hours examining at a range of five inches. Perry
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 10 months ago

Faux comment

One day I'm gonna write a bit of overblown rhapsody about some vapid prettiness, or the glories of nature, or possibly even about angels or other transcendent beings. I'll use lots of Latinate words, and torture the reader's ears with line breaks that mark Significant Passages To Follow. But until then, I'm stickin' with apparent whimsy---which seems to have a perverse effect here. Not a chuckle in a carload. Should I add a comment now, about the humor of Ernie Bushmiller? Nah, most of you wouldn't get it, despite his obvious influence on most of us here. And he has been dead for a while now, which doesn't help his reputation any.
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 3 months ago

Why write another faux

Why write another faux comment, you ask? Because the poems I'm doin' that for today have not been visited a hundred times yet---and their 'visits' include a substantial number of 'visits' engendered by my returns to the pieces, and some spurious 'visits' that appear to be artifacts of bugs in the program. So, get used it: I keep recommenting until I feel that the poem has had enough exposure to lend value to the numbers.