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Jun 23, 2009
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THE MOON AND THE NIGHT MARE
The moon and the night mare. The moon awoke the night mare,To canter by his side,Always and forever to surf the waters wide. Beguiled by his attention She urgently gives chase,Sinews straining, blazing, his night mare gathers pace. She streaks toward her suitor,His love ignites a flame,Spangled embers dancing behind her plum black mane. Cloaked in opaque armour She slyly changes form Spitting twisted lightning bolts, raging up a storm. Sticky giant tentaclesEnveloping his soulPulling, squeezing leading him toward a big black hole. The fires of his passion Burst from her heart of clay Pure gentle shafts of light cascade the Milky Way. A shimmering white phantomIn diamond studded beamsEmerges and transforms fulfilling all his dream. Together and foreverThey surf the waters wide,Reflected shifting patterns lapping on the tide.
— mand, Jun 23, 2009
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Ravenshakti
17 years 1 month ago
Beautiful!!
mand
17 years 1 month ago
Raven
Candlewitch
17 years 1 month ago
Hello
mand
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Cat
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
The peace of expectancy reigns
Seren
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Dear Mand
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