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Praise My Blood

place your axe

deep  into my skull

 

now praise the flow

of my blood

 

and feel the pain

which I give to thee

 

now you have your

place of worship

 


©2009 Lenny Gazbowski

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— Lenny of Cohen, Jun 22, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

UMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmm….Lenny

UMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmm....Lenny, Lenny, Lenny. I bow in worship. ~A "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin
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Lenny of Cohen

16 years ago

Thanking YOU!

I too like this poem and am sad that it hasn't been read more often! On the plus side I have you two wonderful poets who have done so! Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny