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Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Jun 22, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Apsara (Succubus)

Apsara
by: Edge (my  Male Alter Ego)

stripped and skating across
the sex-soaked sweat-slick sheets
you are the succubus of my dreams
squirming in my avaricious arms
greedily devouring your lips
like candy kisses at carnival


— Candlewitch, Jun 22, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 11 months ago

Cat...

sounds wet and wild... and damn fun! carnival kisses was almost sweet for the rest of it... but then that may just be what you were going for... the sweetness of the wetted ride... the plunging of the apple waters... title was good, but without your explanation I would have had to look it up... so thanks for that... the sexual nymph... oooooo, such implications. Richard
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

=)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Richard. I'll think about doing more with this piece... Always, Cat
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Jayne

LOL! Thanks for your vote of approval! I hope this little poem cheered you up a little, Love, Cat
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 11 months ago

I love reading of you Cat,

I love reading of you Cat, can add nothing to this, it is right & a joy the way it is.~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o
PN

Pen Name

16 years 11 months ago

LOL... Cat

awesome write... Pen Name