Apsara (Succubus)

Apsara
by: Edge (my Male Alter Ego)

stripped and skating across
the sex-soaked sweat-slick sheets
you are the succubus of my dreams
squirming in my avaricious arms
greedily devouring your lips
like candy kisses at carnival

— Candlewitch, Jun 22, 2009

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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Critiques

themoonman

17 years 1 month ago

Cat...

sounds wet and wild... and damn fun! carnival kisses was almost sweet for the rest of it... but then that may just be what you were going for... the sweetness of the wetted ride... the plunging of the apple waters... title was good, but without your explanation I would have had to look it up... so thanks for that... the sexual nymph... oooooo, such implications. Richard

Candlewitch

17 years 1 month ago

=)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Richard. I'll think about doing more with this piece... Always, Cat

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

OoooOoooo Cat this one is

OoooOoooo Cat this one is awesome ... love it ... hope your well much love Jayne x

Candlewitch

17 years 1 month ago

Dear Jayne

LOL! Thanks for your vote of approval! I hope this little poem cheered you up a little, Love, Cat

Seren

17 years 1 month ago

LOL …. I dont know about

LOL .... I dont know about cheering me up but it did 'Something' ha ha ha HUGZ love Jayne ...

Cloudthings

17 years 1 month ago

I love reading of you Cat,

I love reading of you Cat, can add nothing to this, it is right & a joy the way it is.~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o

Candlewitch

17 years 1 month ago