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ALL THE GOLD
"All The Gold"
All the gold of the sun
the silver of the moon
the diamonds of the mountains
the pearls of the sea
the jets of the night
the opals of the northern lights
the sapphires of the heavens
the emeralds of the grass
I feel your passions and desires
and reel in dizziness
I feel your joys and sadness
all the hours
and they devour my pains
not a second of the day
will I slip you from my mind
not a moment of the night
from my embrace
I will love you till I die
and will look into your eye
while I enfold you
in my thoughts
and kiss your lovely face
my dearest name of grace
let me hold you
penetrate
your deep recesses
hide
behind the willows tresses
make love to you beyond
your wildest streams
pour tears of silver over you
go with you in the flow of you
and never leave the memory
of your dreams
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Critiques
bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Margaraet Ann,
Geezer
16 years 11 months ago
GOLD!
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
But they would be in a mirror image
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Ann...
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
Ok, glad it made your night Richard