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Austral Dreaming

From Byron bay to Broome, on rolling russet plains
beauty shine's the Kimberly, when the northern territory rains
My heart will always weep, when the scent of wattle's lost
gum trees out of sight, my world lays unembossed

The Kookaburra laughs, as dawn lights us with grace
we really love to giggle, even wearing egg on face
our words are sometimes drawled, but wait theres a but
when we get excited? is when things start heating up

In Pub's and R.S.L's your bound to meet good blokes
even cheeky sheilas who don't mind a dirty joke,
at everything we do we strive to reach the stars
even when we're older and writing our memoirs

A country mixed in color of every different race
But every one of us? Is a heartbeat of this place
creative souls are we building from red soil
everything we have? was made from honest spoils

The Kooris and the white folk ? get along alright
but sometimes when they drink, they start aground to fight
the old men roar with laughter, the ladies are aghast
publican runs yelling, hes red enough to blast

Eucalypt and kangaroos are some of our trademarks
if want to see real beauties? our forests cant be past
mountain streams and waterfalls, we really have it all
and even in a snowfall, we've had a bloody ball

Whiteness lines our shores kissed with foamy waves
lining round our border is a multitude of caves,
rain-forest glistens, plants are rich with life
I really hate to see them, get in global strife

Cyclones rage our shores, fire our summer nights
beauty rests within, our hearts and red-gum minds
no different are our faces, in this far-reaching world
because a youthful land we are, we've bowed our heads to toil

— Seren, Jun 21, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Critiques

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

=0

Wow. Thanks for the poetic glimpse into your magnificent and (for me) far away land. I have always wanted to visit Australia. Your poem makes me want to pack a bag and get on a plane! Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Cat

Your very welcome ... I had started to think this was a bomb but if you like it thats good enough for me ... you ever come down under you have a place to stay whenever you need it ... I love my country and we are a bunch of larakins but we also have some great beauty and depth among us ... Hugz Love Jayne x
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Blanka

Thank you sooo much ... I am new to poetry only having started seriously writing three months ago , what started out as a hobby has now turned into a passion , you make me blush with your compliments but I am grateful meens I am learning and doing something right .... I love this country we have problems like anyone else around the world social Issues , political issues but we also have some of the most breathtaking scenery in the world , I am so proud of my homeland that I wanted to write a poem about the real people , blue collar workers that go to the pub in the afternoons to have a beer with their mates , joe average , we have a multicultural mix of might and beauty ... I know how blessed I am to live in my country , I see the news , the wars civil and other ... tearing our world apart , here I love in a peaceful country mostly ... I am truely blessed ... Love Jayne x
SS

Silent Whisper…

16 years 11 months ago

AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE !!!!!

AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE !!!!! OI !! OI !! OI !!! yeh thats right...aussie's rules... F&%k everyone else haha love the poem tho...perfectly described this place n how brilliant it is :P
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Bj ...........

AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE OI OI OI This little aussie is proud of who we are and you know that lol ..... just wanted to give this a taste of our part of home lol drunks and all... love you Jayne x x So glad another Aussie liked it :)
B

Bosscombat

16 years 11 months ago

:)

The land of oz is quite good...I don't wanna live anywhere else.. Enjoyed this write sorry its taken me so long to comment technology hates me at the moment.. Another 5 starer :) <3
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Hey thats ok hun I know your

Hey thats ok hun I know your busy with the band and touring and working .. Just to see your picture next to my poems cheers me up :D I am surpirsed you never sleep much LOL but then neither do I lol ... but thank you for the comment so glad you guys liked this one its one of my sentimental favourites ... just cause its about home ...Love Jayne x
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

16 years 11 months ago

Jayne

what is this a tourist plug! LOL Your descriptions of your home land is awesome, I don't think you left a thing out? Beautiful picture's you painted here, it felt like a romp full of fun!! I've never been, but I have a trip planned to go in 2011. I'm going to the middle east with some friend in 2010. now I'm look forward to going to your home! thanks, Eddie
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Eduardo thank you lol

Didnt write it as a tourist plug but if it brings such wonderful poets to our shores it cant be a bad thing ... I did miss a couple of things they were the platypus and koalas' but I am writing a childrens poem with them in it for my nephew so I sort of left it out LOL ... This is how my homeland makes me feel we are called the lucky country and how right they are ... Much Love Jayne x
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Ashes4now

16 years 11 months ago

Byron

From Byron bay to Broome,on rolling russet plains like the first sentence alot. when I read a poem I never judge the poet, but I try to understand the person/poet. To correct this poem is not nessecary. spelling for me today is not my best. Seren, it was nice to read your poems. Too bad I won't be on the comp to read more for about a week or two or who knows. Take care, Ash D.M.
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you !!

Dont think we have had the pleasure before nice to meet you Ash :) ... you are always welcome to critic my poems I am new at this a novice really .. but I love playing in words ... this one was just a bit of fun and I wanted to share my thoughts on my homeland maybe more from a laymans veiw of Aussie .. glad you liked it though will have a read of you very soon its early morning here will have a look in the daylight ... take care regards Jayne x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Jayne

Congratulations on the Evolution Spot Light!!! This poem deserves it! Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Thanks Cat (hugz)

I love this poem its one of my favourites not because its technically perfect but because its exactly how i feel about home .. Much Love Jayne x x
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 11 months ago

Are you the

next Judith Wright? We need more Under the Capricorn Sun! This one of yours is just the best! I love writing about this land of great landscape! :)fleur
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Judith Wright is one of my Idols ...

'self that night undrowns when I'm asleep'...those are my favourite words of hers ... words I wish I had writen ... you know how much I love night and her words perfectly describe how I feel that I come alive in the nightime... and now you both have inspired me again I have had an idea ... she is a wonderful poet, I will always strive to reach the excellence she achieved in her lifetime ... She wasnt just a poet she was so very much more and that you could even mention her name in your comment, brought me undone ... Fleur you darlin thing if I could even be a scratch of what she brought to Australian literature I would be a proud woman .. Thank you ... I have sung for my supper and been proud but never more proud than I am right now , just a dream to be like her would be enough ... But I dare not she is and will remain one of my favourite Australian poets till the day I die ... wow I rambled LOL ... Love you Jayne x x (hug)
O

orgami

16 years 10 months ago

readings of the land way under

you have descriptions rich and pique of interested I am Stories from the write of you never tire of the poems a magic chase to read Thank you
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

What a Beautiful thing to

What a Beautiful thing to say Steven ... this one was writen as a ballad so that if ever I decide to turn it into a song , which I hope to do one day ... I love Australia and wanted to share a bit of the real australiana that most people live everyday ... I hope that our spirit is in this poem because thats what I set out to do ... glad the magic drew you this way my friend (hug) much Love Jayne x x x
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Superb

It's hard to believe that you live on the other side of my world, so, so far away; but this beautiful poem brought me right there to Australia. I love the Australian accent, the movies and the soaps. And now I love your country. Thank you JayCee for the journey down-under...Beeeeautiful x Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Xena

Some people say we live at the end of the world but I like to think it starts here ... I love our country its rich with beauty, I am so glad you liked it hun ... love and big hugs JayCee x x x (“In time we hate that which we often fear.” William Shakespeare quote)