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leonard daranjo
Jun 21, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

fallen trees


mangled carcassesripped right out of the earth’s crustlie languorously  
— leonard daranjo, Jun 21, 2009
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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 1 month ago

fallen trees

Leonard,storms have come through the area and you painted a picture with words, of what the news broadcast on TV. ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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leonard daranjo

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you Janice

No matter where I go, you are always there. Thank you for that. You are one of my best friends on Neopoet. Leonard

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