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Jun 20, 2009
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Portrait
Painting a picture
a picture of you
you and your friend
a friend of mine
you sit together
on a comfy couch
ready and waiting
two friends I like
this portrait of you
your friend of mine
with face in profile
with a wide smile
an intimate portrait
of a quiet time
between two friends
two friends of mine
I mix the paint
to paint your face
colour in the warmth
two hearts so dear
captured well
in the light this
portrait holds
two friends of mine
a picture of you
you and your friend
a friend of mine
you sit together
on a comfy couch
ready and waiting
two friends I like
this portrait of you
your friend of mine
with face in profile
with a wide smile
an intimate portrait
of a quiet time
between two friends
two friends of mine
I mix the paint
to paint your face
colour in the warmth
two hearts so dear
captured well
in the light this
portrait holds
two friends of mine
— Fleur MacDonald, Jun 20, 2009
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weirdelf
17 years 1 month ago
Fucking superb!
Fleur MacDonald
17 years 1 month ago
aww thanks
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
What Jess said LOL ...
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Fluer, I liked the
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