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Jun 20, 2009
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DEPARTING
Perfectly impermanent.....
So fragile,
These egg shells
Overly dry and brittle,
Waiting for Life's callous touch
To turn them to dust.
While I am nothing
But a weeping heart
That these shards pierce,
My blood flowing out in tears.
I have many wounds now......
Yet my heart never fails
To well over with the salted emotion,
Spilling eternally over the brim
Of an ocean blue sky.
Shall I take your fine dust
And mingle it
With the liquid azure of my sorrow,
And let the stark whiteness of your absence
Paint the shadows in my soul
A lighter color?
Now a healing poultice
For my weary spirit,
Comforting as time passes.....
Becoming the backdrop on which
Your memory will lie.
— Blue_Halcyon, Jun 20, 2009
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Candlewitch
17 years 1 month ago
Very sad
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
Beauty and Grace in sadness
dina grey
17 years 1 month ago
Very beautiful and sad. I
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
Healing
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