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You joust with honour, good carny (“Ode” no. 6 of a series)

How do we balance our boldness
tug courage from the scars
fold the hurts, and disperse perceived side shots
to greet a new perspective?
It takes a good heart, and the road we grace is wisdom
It requires a sturdy desire to fly the flag of integrity
And, more admirably, it takes the insight that it is the other that matters
That we could be the one to turn the tide and let love flow toward our beaches
(no matter who drew sword first)
And then grace the steed of gentle pride and ride
To the freedom of elation
The liberation of a brightened heart
Interaction that glistens or shimmers, the gorgeous colour of a summer dragonfly

I watched you (more than once)
The slip to sadness
Heard regret and remorse
And in the light of day
Beneath the shining armour
I heard the tale of internal battle with the happy ending
Where generous and brave apology was offered
Mistakes acknowledged and care administered
And then… in glory riding forth, the celebration
The hearts won
Mistakes became the cherished markers of our learning
You know it Gee
“Third time lucky” learner
Transparency your brightest ally,
and so endearing, engendering trust and care  
Your shield is warmth and generosity
Your loyalty is binding and precious
And I am proud of you
And blessed to be among those you champion and honour
— Cloudthings, Jun 20, 2009

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Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Anni,

There you are. Brian
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Anni ...

Another winner you just keep soaring higher into those clouds hun , leaving us mere mortals to watch your flight as groundhogs , you have a way with you ... Love Jayne x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

I am most humbled...

If I have to gush just one more time....O.K! I'll do it! This is the place that has become my home away from home. The place that I wish I found long ago on the life-long quest of finding my inner-self. This is an honor that one can only dream of and aspire to. I cannot fail on this quest, because I find new pieces of the puzzle everytime I ride forth. This great kingdom, sustains my soul. New adventure and new insight. When I visit the home skies of 'Cloudthings' I am treated with respect and greeted warmly. I guess the reports of the "Paladin's death are greatly exagerated. Those dumb ravens couldn't know that knight's armour hid shallow breaths and a still beating heart! I think those boys invited him home and the family took him in and nursed him back to health. Whereupon he swore that if they ever needed him, to blow on a magic flute and he would come charging to the rescue![magic flute/e-mail/P.M.] I am tired now, and will now take a short nap. Honourably yours, Sir Gee.P.S. I do look like a carnie yet, don't I?