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Jun 19, 2009
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The bed is a world between us.
You turn to face the wall and I
face the door.
The polite "good mornings"
are all well and said, harsh
whispers at the early dawn.
You make your coffee
and stroll to the deck,
these days I don't
even ask for a cup.
The routine has set in
like a black cloud in this
old house. I don't ask
for much.
A rare touch is all that
is shared, a tender moment
that is thoughtless and
mournful.
You don't notice the
boxes near the room,
empty now, but waiting
for treasure.
A plane ticket on the counter
doesn't seem to phase you,
near the keys that I left for
you.
No need for letters and notes
you won't even notice when
I am gone.
— dina grey, Jun 19, 2009
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Seren
17 years 1 month ago
Awwwww Dina
dina grey
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks
themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Dina...
dina grey
17 years 1 month ago
So true
Craig Norris
17 years 1 month ago
very nicely caught
dina grey
17 years 1 month ago
Hollow cup
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