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Jun 19, 2009
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Vom Vom
I had a little bit too
much to drink
last night, I think
I'm feeling
a little off today
got out of bed
too soon
not enough to
eat and too many
pills
by lunchtime I
was almost
vom vom
couldn't eat anything
solid so opted
for soup
but I'm still not
feeling too good
even after all that
water I drank down
to stop the dehydration
it was four glasses of
champagne at the gallery
and then at home
it was probably
another four plus of
a lovely Chardonnay
which I found
quite easy to drink
on an empty
stomach...
much to drink
last night, I think
I'm feeling
a little off today
got out of bed
too soon
not enough to
eat and too many
pills
by lunchtime I
was almost
vom vom
couldn't eat anything
solid so opted
for soup
but I'm still not
feeling too good
even after all that
water I drank down
to stop the dehydration
it was four glasses of
champagne at the gallery
and then at home
it was probably
another four plus of
a lovely Chardonnay
which I found
quite easy to drink
on an empty
stomach...
— Fleur MacDonald, Jun 19, 2009
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Critiques
Craig Norris
17 years 1 month ago
you know what they say
Fleur MacDonald
17 years 1 month ago
Thanks Craig,
weirdelf
17 years 1 month ago
I never have learned yet
Fleur MacDonald
17 years 1 month ago
never alone
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