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THE BITTER BLENED SWEET

THE BITER BLENDED SWEET

The  bitter is her shell
The poison .
The anger
Mixed by secrets
Sometime she will tell

Her  life
The hurt
The pain
So many questions
Of love
Unexplained

This was the bitter
In her life
This scar
Will not heal
To the day she dies

A life
Of trust
She always hide
Protected
Defending
This sweetness in her mind

If bitter can be blended  sweet
It lays within her
Soul in a time
This little girl
Cried , to sleep

For the bitter
Still lives in this time
This  little girl
Asking when
Complete love
Will be mines

— press, Jun 18, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 11 months ago

Hi Press

This write is very good, so to make it a little better some of the words are in the wrong contex:- She always hide Will be mines Take the "S" from here and put it at the end of Hide, I will be back next week properly I hope, You take care, Yours Ian.T
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Press

Your reaching the stars now this is sooo lovely .. this bitter into sweet .. needs a couple of punctuation things and stuff .. but I really liked this one ... you went to that place again I think ... Love Jayne x
Rett

Rett

16 years 11 months ago

Okay son, another fine one

I think you are finding you niche! Well done. couple of context error but otherwise very very good! Respectfully, Rett: "God made an idiot for practice, then he made a school board." Mark Twain For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905