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Jun 18, 2009
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save me
drop me in the sand
take the magic hand
i was once alone
put me in my place
save my fallen grace
let me go unshown
i dance inside your eyes
little devils lies
hours go unowned
where i once was
where i should be
castles made of sand
kings wont understand
i cant breath alone
empires in the cloudes
peasents wont be found
neither now or then
save me, i am dieing in my living room
and falling in the rising tide
save me please
take the magic hand
i was once alone
put me in my place
save my fallen grace
let me go unshown
i dance inside your eyes
little devils lies
hours go unowned
where i once was
where i should be
castles made of sand
kings wont understand
i cant breath alone
empires in the cloudes
peasents wont be found
neither now or then
save me, i am dieing in my living room
and falling in the rising tide
save me please
— washing tears, Jun 18, 2009
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bjp
16 years 11 months ago
Dear Washing Tears,
washing tears
16 years 11 months ago
not at all. you can qualify
Blackcatatheart
16 years 9 months ago
I like the line “little