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docmaverick
docmaverick
Jun 18, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Game Faces

I didn't "tilt"
she did.
The ball was coming down a little,

going both side to side
gravity as his bride;

then.....game over ? Game over !

I wasn't "privy"
to all dialogs,
we were in the "lightning round",

she was slightly ahead
was it something I said?

Game over ? Game over !

I loved her
am physically drained.
Endurance was something I could never endure;

I'm ready to drop,
this all has to stop;

game over ? Game Over !
— docmaverick, Jun 18, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Doc I can feel the confusion

Doc I can feel the confusion of a love gone awry ... sad but true ... funny you posted this one I posted one called insanity thy name be love ... just struck me as serendipious .. Love Jayne x
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 11 months ago

And you, my dear....

...saw exactly through that confusion towards what I was saying. I appreciate that, you, AND your comment ! Write on ! #{:>{)}@==== docmaverick.