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Jun 18, 2009
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DREAM
Could I have just one more please?
Another dream, sonnet, realm of
distant land?
I will pack my great-grandmother's
old Lady Boston,
as it has not seen much travel to any place
distant.
I'd love a thunderous train
with soft, leather seats, fine
china and a silver teaspoon
with the earl grey and butter
on a scone.
Any place would be fine
just as long as I am
away from routine and
the continuum of certainty.
I'd adore any view as long as the picture
is languid with flowers and butterflies
and woodsy chatter among the trees
Could I have just one more please?
— dina grey, Jun 18, 2009
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Critiques
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 11 months ago
That was nice,
dina grey
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
I agree with fleur
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 11 months ago
Any place would be fine just