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Weeds Bugs




Weeds
Bugs

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you have to admire
spring weeds: soon as I
eat them, they grow back

                                 ---barbsdad
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hurry
hurry

I snack on weeds that
insects eat; I hurry lest
the bugs get there first

^

eu stphabg o waoedz tha
stphebgts aet; eu hur hrefpt
-t pwugs tkpwet thr- tpeurpt

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ask
Ms. Bug

feeling neighborly,
I ask Ms. Bug, "why is it
you select those greens

I might pick for lunch?"

says she, "why is it
you wish to eat wild plants, so
lively crisp in spring,

that make my meals?

can't you find what you
want at your local grocer's?"
to which I respond,

"no"

^

tpaoelg tphaeubhreu,
eu sk ph-z kpwug, "kwr- st-
u shrebgt thoefp tkpwraoepbs

eu phaoeut peubg tpor hrufrpblg?"

saeus she, "kwr- st-
u weurb to aet waoeuld phrapbts, so
hreufl kreufp tph spreupbg,

tha phaeubg pheu phaoels?

kapbt u tpaoeupbd wa u
wapbt at ur hrol tkpwroefrz?"
to weu eu spopb,

"tpho"

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 10 months ago

Aww, Chuck

While this is a cute write, I feel (just my little small opinion) that the "bug language" didn't really work for it. Maybe you'd be able to write out what she had said, instead? ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Flying so high, trying to remember How many cigarettes did I bring along? When I get down, I'll jump in a taxi-cab Driving through London-town to cry you a song..." - Jethro Tull
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barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

Geez, Louise! Congratulations ...

… on making a fool out of yourself (again) with your useless comment and your nonsense vote. I get that you don’t have to be so interested in all of my work that you might have first found out elsewhere at this site the explanation for what you wrongly perceive to be “bug language.” One piece and one vote is not that big a deal. But the fact is that your ongoing willful misunderstandings-s-s-s of my pieces is getting tiresome. You are often quick to judge negatively and to vote punishingly while you yourself admit you don’t understand something, and I’ve been letting it slide for too long. To my memory, I’ve never voted on anything of yours, and with good reason. I’m sorry I offered a couple of suggestions on your rain piece, and I wasn’t fooled by the terse politeness of your response nor by the acquiescent subterfuge in your subsequent poem about a day in Neopoet. (Did I read that right? What's up with the "in" there, anyway? Sheesh.) I’ve never posted any work at this site (whether a “cute write” or otherwise) to warrant a lowly 3 from you or from anybody else. I think it’s immoral for you to vote on something you don’t trouble yourself to even try to comprehend, and I think your child-scrawled crayon marking of a 3 is shameful. Sometimes you give me a 4 tied to praises but with no helpful remark as to how I could earn a 5 from you. Other times you express your complete and utter puzzlement over something that I’ve written, yet you proceed to vote anyway when you have no business judging what you do not grasp intellectually and emotionally. That recent too-good-to-be-true 5 you gave me was a first, wasn’t it? Pained you into now sliding in here first to smear my page and slap me with this undeserved conspicuous 3? Really, Jess. If you can’t offer positively constructive advice for substantial improvement (and I think we can agree that you can’t), your vote is hollow and should be more embarrassing to you than it is to me. Your vote here is nothing more than a show of blatant ignorance. Do you still feel good about it? I’m not overreacting. You and I just do not connect on any level, and I can live with that. I really do not benefit from your hasty comments, and I’ll thank you to refrain from commenting and voting on my pieces in the future. Chuck
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

I can see you foraging with

I can see you foraging with the bugs Chuck , being at one with nature , I envy you outside in the world , my house holds me captive , too many other *bugs* for me at the moment in this big old world .. I hibernate to get better .. so I will just bask in the nature you bring to your page for the time being ... Much love Jayne (hugz) x
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barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

If I might ...

cede important ground to the bugs, they're actually quite helpful. I know (usually) that if the bugs like a plant ... that probably it's an edible for me, too. (Don't get the same service at supermarts, I'm sad to say.) Don't have much have much use for God, but if I did, I would likely say, "May God bless those bugs that guide me/point me in the right direction." Hugs back, Chuck
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 10 months ago

I apologize. Have sent you

I apologize. Have sent you a PM on the matter. You're right, I should have read the works prior to this, and I would have been able to see a pattern. Do know that I am truly hurt by your statements above. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "Flying so high, trying to remember How many cigarettes did I bring along? When I get down, I'll jump in a taxi-cab Driving through London-town to cry you a song..." - Jethro Tull
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barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

Library's ...

about to boot me off the computer. Virus troubles, evidently. I think we can handle this further by PM (perhaps tomorrow). And thanx for responding. Yours, Chuck
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 10 months ago

Weeds Bugs

As usual Chuck your gems here amuse and entertain. Wonderfully written! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

Thanx much

I'd 'puter a longer reply here, but the library's about to get mean with me. So bye for now. Thanx again, Chuck
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Chuck

While I did not understand the bug language (does it have to do with your prior work 'Damaged Brain Exposed'?), I did find it entertaining and it certainly did have a relevant message. Yours, Deelilah