Rain ( a haiku)

Dry your tears, beautiful girl, you've a wonderful life ahead of you. It is raining here, too! Always, Cat

Not a tear; collectively a torrent. What sadness lets you write so well? Brian

a well-placed (perhaps, depending on your meaning) hyphen, as in The cold[-]falling rain and a double spelling correction (in the same word) to conform with Webster's: God’s [overabundant] tears Trickle down my face also Note the removal of the hyphen after over. But also note the change of e to a in -ant. Seems appropriate. Somehow. Yours, Chuck

Jess Haiku I never really understood this form? Short and sweet Rain Mmmmmmmm I know this well. I cry a lot as I walk in the rain as no one can see my free falling tears that I wear on the outside as well as within. The ocean's I cry these days with nothing to look forward too just at a stand still. On a bridge I stand over a small stream. My tears fall freely below. Into the stream to flow on regardless to meander travel to parts unknown. That's me. The sun comes out my tears evapourate clouds form for my tears to free fall again from above. The circle of life continues but why do I? Electric blue lonesome blue, so blue

Amazing imagery in this piece. Thank you for creating it! All my best! DS Baker