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Portrait

Painting a picture
a picture of you
you and your friend
a friend of mine

you sit together
on a comfy couch
ready and waiting
two friends I like

this portrait of you
your friend of mine
with face in profile
with a wide smile

an intimate portrait
of a quiet time
between two friends
two friends of mine

I mix the paint
to paint your face
colour in the warmth
two hearts so dear

captured well
in the light this
portrait holds
two friends of mine

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 10 months ago

Fucking superb!

Utterly elegant, simple intimate and perfect. The best poem of yours I have read. This process of painting and writing together clearly works. Cheers, Jess
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

What Jess said LOL ...

But this not only told me the story , Fleur you did paint a picture in words and it was beautiful ... Much love Jayne x
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 10 months ago

Hi Fluer, I liked the

Hi Fluer, I liked the simplicity in this it just speaks what it is with warmth & a kind of unaffected innocence, made me long to see the painting.~ Anni ~~~ "Courage, it would seem, is nothing less than the power to overcome danger, misfortune, fear, injustice, while continuing to affirm inwardly that life with all its sorrows is good; that everything is meaningful even if in a sense beyond o