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Abi
Jun 18, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

te amo

El primer beso que te di la carita bonita que vi igualita al dia que te conoci el mismito dia que me enamore de ti como un angelito que callo del cielo la que me calienta y desrite el hielo la dueña de mi corazon y mi pedazito de bon bon mas dulce que un dulce y mas bonita que una rosa y tanbien la que quiero como mi esposa.
— Abi, Jun 18, 2009
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Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 1 month ago

Estoy aprendiendo espanol de la boca de mi amor

Que bello! Leer un poema en espanol!!! Este es un poema classico dulce de amor. I am learning still espanol. Estoy aprendiendo espanol de la boca de mi amor. I am learning Spanish from the mouth of my lover!~ Anni ~~~ "To forgive is to set a prisoner free and discover that the prisoner was you." ~Lewis B. Smedes
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

17 years 1 month ago

Just a suggestion

Have you considered writing the english translation under the spanish so that more people can enjoy your work? Justy a suggestion for you to think about. I wish I knew how to read spanish, but all I know is a very few words. Always, Cat

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