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Does the soul quietly know?

Sometimes you feel so far away

Although we’ve journeyed

To the innermost spaces, together

 

The mysterious currents that intersected our lives,

Now seem to be guiding us on different paths,

From the crossroads where we first met and walked together

 

Nay, I do not doubt our love,

For what we share is unconditional and pure

And yet, the soul quietly knows what the heart is unwilling to accept

 

Our paths will gradually diverge,

Till we become specks on the horizon,

Walking on with love, quietly resident

 

Yes laughter will cast a pleasing mask over the dull ache

That’s growing to be a constant companion;

Along with the hope, that we will be together

 

Before we re-enter the bodies of our next life

Or perhaps even after, so that we may know

The joys of living on this earthly plane, with a soul mate.

— Taniaspoetry, Jun 16, 2009

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Craig Norris

16 years 11 months ago

Tania this is great

the soul quietly knows what the heart is unwilling to accept this poem quietly underscores the truth I like it very much. Love. Craig
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Taniaspoetry

16 years 11 months ago

the soul quietly knows

Craig thank you. The truth has many stories and it is good to find a few pearls from time to time. Cheers Tania
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leonard daranjo

16 years 11 months ago

Very well written Tania

Does the soul quietly know? I think it does and it does indeed keep telling us things that the heart is unwilling to accept. It is we who have to live in accordance with what we are being told if we have to receive the peace and serenity that the soul would like to bestow on us. I really like this poem. It has a lot of depth. Leonard
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Taniaspoetry

16 years 11 months ago

Resonance

Hi Leonard So glad this poem resonated with you. I agree that the soul keeps telling us but the heart is unwilling and so robbed of serenity till such time we learn to accept. Not easy though Thank you for sharing your thoughts Leonard! Cheers, Tania
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Celadon

16 years 11 months ago

Celadon Hi Tania!On the same

Celadon Hi Tania! On the same subject * the soul quietly knows what the heart is unwilling to accept*....powerful lines!... My sister used to say " With one eye we see the world outside; with the other, we see the truth within." Thank you so much! Warm regards, Celadon
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Taniaspoetry

16 years 11 months ago

Thank you

Hi Celadon Thank you for stopping by and sharing the wise quote. Cheers Tania