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Does the soul quietly know?
Sometimes you feel so far away
Although we’ve journeyed
To the innermost spaces, together
The mysterious currents that intersected our lives,
Now seem to be guiding us on different paths,
From the crossroads where we first met and walked together
Nay, I do not doubt our love,
For what we share is unconditional and pure
And yet, the soul quietly knows what the heart is unwilling to accept
Our paths will gradually diverge,
Till we become specks on the horizon,
Walking on with love, quietly resident
Yes laughter will cast a pleasing mask over the dull ache
That’s growing to be a constant companion;
Along with the hope, that we will be together
Before we re-enter the bodies of our next life
Or perhaps even after, so that we may know
The joys of living on this earthly plane, with a soul mate.
Critiques
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
Tania this is great
Taniaspoetry
16 years 11 months ago
the soul quietly knows
leonard daranjo
16 years 11 months ago
Very well written Tania
Taniaspoetry
16 years 11 months ago
Resonance
Celadon
16 years 11 months ago
Celadon Hi Tania!On the same
Taniaspoetry
16 years 11 months ago
Thank you