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Moon Dance At Lost Lake

Moon Dance At Lost Lake

In a hidden valley far below
A golden lake by moonlights glow
The wooded hillside does confide
A silver brook
Tucked in its side

Quietly the night
While bathed in eerie light
Lends silhouette as the faeries dance
In glades and meadows their
Midnight prance
Neer seen by errant intruders glance
Except the prowling deer (by chance)

Misty curtains cloak the lake
Where fireflies tease the trout to take
Their meals from silver rings and wake
While serenaded nightly
The stars gather brightly
Listening to an esoteric tune
Provided by the lost lake loon........

— mugsy, Jun 15, 2009

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 11 months ago

On the Night of the Moon...(Monday)

This Poem of yours is pure Magic! On the Night of the Moon... in my Lucid Dream... I visited a place, just like you describe... There were Hobgoblins, Faeries and other magical folk. I met a very handsome Hobgoblin! We danced... Enchantment was everywhere... and it was good! Beautiful Poem! Synchronicity... Thank you. Vanessa-Gabrielle