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Jun 15, 2009
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NATURE MOURNS WITH ME
NATURE MOURNS WITH ME...
Mother Nature is raw
her climes are cold, chaos ridden* with you now gone, Father Sage is wizened Choleric clouds darken my daysthe sun is distracted - The moon’s gone away Birds fly featherless,
the cattle lie low
flowers hide themselves
afraid to grow Now it snows when it shines
rains when I pine
no more Sunny Days
that I wish could be mine .
Asphyxiated days
choke off Love’s supply
dousing fire's flames
that quickly die.
.
Darkness leaves no place for vision
Vacuum leaves no space for Air
BjR 15 June‘09
#climes - climate
* ridden - {p.p. of RIDE} a combining form meaning “obsessed with,” “overwhelmed by”
Mother Nature is raw
her climes are cold, chaos ridden* with you now gone, Father Sage is wizened Choleric clouds darken my daysthe sun is distracted - The moon’s gone away Birds fly featherless,
the cattle lie low
flowers hide themselves
afraid to grow Now it snows when it shines
rains when I pine
no more Sunny Days
that I wish could be mine .
Asphyxiated days
choke off Love’s supply
dousing fire's flames
that quickly die.
.
Darkness leaves no place for vision
Vacuum leaves no space for Air
BjR 15 June‘09
#climes - climate
* ridden - {p.p. of RIDE} a combining form meaning “obsessed with,” “overwhelmed by”
— Bonitaj, Jun 15, 2009
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Seren
17 years 1 month ago
There is no space or air
Bonitaj
17 years 1 month ago
NATURE MOURNS WITH US
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
I too love it BjR
Candlewitch
17 years 1 month ago
=(
Bonitaj
17 years 1 month ago
NATURE MOURNS WITH me
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