My Weight of Pain

You clever woman I had orginally started with Weight in the title but changed it to wait ... glad you picked up the subtle pun ... The last line is meant to hold the reader in now .... Taking the potion/medicine , is a beauty of humanity ... hmmm thats given me an idea ... I shall think on it till I edit it ...thank you for the read so glad you like it much love Jayne x x

Clever you , worked it out ... but your right if you turned the page side on it would look like waves and was meant to be like that , This is just a night like anyone would have , tried to put the waves in to give it the feel of the poem ... Love Jayne x

You honour me with your words my friend ... I am ok things arent getting to me yet , I try to stay positive everyday , and I can say with all honesty this site has given me a purpose and something to fill my hours , and for that im forever grateful that I found Neo .... I would wander in the waves with you , I am such a beach bum ... I love just being these days and everytime you say being in now ... its funny I always say that in real world I love being in now , now is all we have , to dream of earlier or later days is fruitless , drawing in the days and savouring them O~ even the cold miserable ones for even they have their own beauty , Do I write in such detail ? i dont know how I write to be honest , I am my own worst judge .. something I might think is awesome ? someone else will see the cracks in the edges lol ... but thats good im learning more and more , my mistakes help me grow , as those in life do ... thanks for the visit ... Much Love Jayne x x

It is night here , I am comfortable not at home though but I am with friends one from here actually Bosscombat , they are kindly putting us up for a couple of nights while we attend my partners brothers funeral ... You always amaze me in your comments , and in the past from time to time , I often read your work only to go back to it the next day to comment , you deeply affect the reader in your words and sometimes your poems hit a nerve in me that i have to calm down before I gush like some fool all over your page LOL ... this is my page so if i gush and look the fool its on me .... You have inspired me with your writing since the first day I was here , I remember reading one of your poems and being so awed that I looked at my humble first poem and thought ... Noooooo..... for a day before submitting it.... But it was worth it , I am happy to toil among you shining stars and watch you blaze across my nights , dusting us with your magic , bewitching us all ... Love Jayne ... P.S its pouring rain here and its a night to write .... you inspired me again

I can see you in your room toiling over your words , As I sit in my big old chair , in front of the computer or sometimes If I am tired I lay in bed and write in my journals ... It depends what sort of mood I am in to where I write lol ... I am a weird creature I have to be in the element that suits my mood best at the paricular time I happen to be writing ... I have a big wrought Iron bed I lay in and I love sitting in my room for it has a tin roof as well ... we not long ago built that part onto the house so its still being finished I have decided to make my room which is pretty big into my santuary for writing when its finished I love Japanese styles and I love dragons have many dragons in my house including me sometimes LOL .... we got home to Bosscombats about an hour ago and we will be home tonight ... will be posting a new poem ive been working on for the last few weeks ... Much love and respect Jayne x x

Thank you so much that is a wonderful comment and I am humbled that you like my little scribbles ... I have writen since I was a young girl never doing anything with them LOL but now ? I write new ones but I am also starting to update older stuff and submit it ... there is a lot of different styles to my poems sometimes I rhyme sometimes I dont sometimes I write in freeform ... it really does depend on my mood and whats happening around me how I am writing ... I am a emotional writer ... but more and more there is thought and planning of my poems to have have better form ...Thank you for the read and the comment *blush* Love Jayne x x