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Jun 15, 2009
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Flame of Inheritance
I watch clouds rise -a distorted prism of disequilibriumholding a mirror image of a beingcrouched in foetal position With the instilling oftotal and utter silence,comes the annihilationof superfluous time Out of the earth’s finest sanda new being emergesHe walks through the rifled blueTowards the wet wingsof a nascent dawn
— leonard daranjo, Jun 15, 2009
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themoonman
17 years 1 month ago
Leonard...
leonard daranjo
17 years 1 month ago
Thank you Richard
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
I dont know why but this
leonard daranjo
17 years 1 month ago
Thank you Jayne
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