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Jun 16, 2009
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Inside/Outside
Inside a song
a killing time resides
of pleasure and pain
an empty heart
a thoughtless whim
of saturated notes
a rounded beat unravels
to a broken heart
on a road to ruin
&
Outside a song
genetic makeup begins
of broken strings
and an empty glass
from inside a dream
a shuffled beat
across the skin
the drumsticks roll
of muted vocal
and muffled tone
a killing time resides
of pleasure and pain
an empty heart
a thoughtless whim
of saturated notes
a rounded beat unravels
to a broken heart
on a road to ruin
&
Outside a song
genetic makeup begins
of broken strings
and an empty glass
from inside a dream
a shuffled beat
across the skin
the drumsticks roll
of muted vocal
and muffled tone
Comments
Kailashana
16 years 10 months ago
And somehow the dirge takes
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
Thankyou sweet one,
Eed Yut
16 years 10 months ago
Brilliant!!
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
Thankyou,