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Inside/Outside

Inside a song
a killing time resides
of pleasure and pain
an empty heart
a thoughtless whim
of saturated notes
a rounded beat unravels
to a broken heart
on a road to ruin


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Outside a song
genetic makeup begins
of broken strings
and an empty glass
from inside a dream
a shuffled beat
across the skin
the drumsticks roll
of muted vocal
and muffled tone


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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

And somehow the dirge takes

And somehow the dirge takes wings. Much enjoyed your poem. ~A "You begin saving the world by saving one person at a time; all else is grandiose romanticism or politics." Charles Bukowski
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Eed Yut

16 years 10 months ago

Brilliant!!

Our one, true (no matter how hard they try!)unadulterated freedom!! Great read Fleur!! Cheers