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Without

 1.

You shouldn't have died
but you did
how utterly cruel
how heartless
how violent,
this terrible beauty
called Love.

2.

I can't see my way through
living without you
I've shed enough tears
to drown in
to make me go blind.

3.

You told me: Be beautiful!
My Geisha face
has all but worn off,
my samauri sword, buried
with you.

4.

Control yourself, woman!
Pick up the pieces of your shattered heart,
the passage of time
is a poem,
see that field of clover?
that silver birch leaf
trembling
near the willow,
uprooted
by the storm?

5.

The rain still flows to the sea
and the sea into the sun
that shines behind
the storm
and so it goes,
and so it goes.

— Kailashana, Jun 13, 2009

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bjp

16 years 12 months ago

Dear Anna,

You are beautiful. Your poetry, excellent and stunning as it is, but a tiny flake from this maker's life. And it is stunning. And it is excellent. Brian.
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Majeedahs_Umi

16 years 12 months ago

i agree

you yake fee=lings we all relate to and put them in ways we could never spwak only fedel...good job be blessed, brandi
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 12 months ago

Blanka, this is one of the

Blanka, this is one of the most exquisite poems I have ever read. Thank you. Love, Anna You begin saving the world by saving one person at a time; all else is grandiose romanticism or politics." Charles Bukowski
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Majeedahs_Umi

16 years 12 months ago

wow

i was dealing with the girls.... sorry for the errors ma be blessed, brandi
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 12 months ago

I understood perfectly

I understood perfectly Brandi, thanks for stopping by and hugs to your beautiful girls. ~A "You begin saving the world by saving one person at a time; all else is grandiose romanticism or politics." Charles Bukowski
Seren

Seren

16 years 12 months ago

Anna

Simply breathtaking I love it ... your a mistress of words , I love your writes and I always look for you ... much love Jayne x x x
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Pen Name

16 years 12 months ago

To fall in love.....

To fall in love is easy but beloved so rare. And yes you are right about nothing changing with out heart break... Pen Name