Basso Profundo

A single note stretches through
Eternity

Filling spaces empty of
Light

I feel my existence stretching
Backwards

Away from this bright shinning
Possibility

Harmonizing with this tone of retro
Infinity

Mychondrial memories find me
Alone

Clutching a pilgrim's sea shell in
Campostela

Por Que...?

DS Baker

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Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

Botticelli painted

Botticelli painted Venus empires rise and fall, from mitochondrial dreams the golden ratio is born Loved your poem. ~A "You begin saving the world by saving one person at a time; all else is grandiose romanticism or politics." Charles Bukowski

weirdelf

16 years 11 months ago

Is there such a thing as an ironic epiphany?

If so I think you just had one, cheers, Jess Forever unwrapping the eternal present.

infinite_dwarf

16 years 11 months ago

Nice to see you posting..

I only have a couple corrections: Shinning -> shining pilgrims -> pilgrim's I liked the easy-going flow that this one had. ~Jess K. ----------------------- "So I open my door to my enemies, and ask could we wipe the slate clean? But they tell me to please go fu** myself; you know you just can't win" - Pink Floyd

dbaker

16 years 10 months ago

Many Thanks

Thank you very much for taking the time to read one of my posts. I am even happier to receive the advice on the obvious spelling errors....ahem. Thats what happens when I am in a hurry. All my absolute best! Cheers! David

Candlewitch

16 years 10 months ago

=)

your language usage was beautiful, it made the poem flow with the greatest of ease. I loved the theme because it was unusual and unique. Nice to see you again! Always, Cat

Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

awesome write mate. i look forward to reading more of your work BossCombat

dbaker

16 years 6 months ago

Comments

Thank you each and everyone of my fellow poets for taking the time to comment on my work. I am sorry that I have not posted a reply sooner, I am currently working on a collection of short stories and sadly, it is taking most of my time. Thank You! Happy Halloween DS Baker