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Seven Stanzas Nineteen Lines




Seven Stanzas
Nineteen Lines

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question
period

I burn a question
followed by a period;
do not answer it

kwe
paoerd

eu pwurpb a kwe
tpold pweu a paoerd;
tko tphot aepb t-

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my
daughter's
house

indeed I treasure
my daughter's house ... and only
because she lives here

pheu
tkaurdz
hous

tkphaoed eu tr-rb
pheu tkaurdz hous ... skp- oepbl
pwaus she hreufs haoer

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even ...

words picked well arrive
anemic; they may suggest ...

colors but cannot ---
cannot create a rainbow

aoefrpb ...

wordz peubgd wel sraoeuf
stpheplg; the phaeu sugt ...

khrors pwu k-pb ---
k-pb kraet a raeupbpwoe

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a
petal
lies

pinks, whites catch my eye;
a petal lies loose aground
in post-noon's shadow

a
pelgts
hraoeus

peufrpbgs, whaoeuts kafp pheu aoeu;
a pelgts hraoeus laos aeutkpwroupbd
tph poefpt-tphaopbz shalgts

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two
pigeons

lovebirds profile pair
by pair in early Phoenix
sun; two pigeons screw

two
peupblgepbs

hrufpweurdz proetpaoeul paeur
pweu paeur tph erl tpaoefrpbg
supb; two peupblgepbs skraou

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Phoenix

bougainvillea blooms
wave pink at passing breezes;
an indoor fan hums

tpaoefrpbgs

pwaogspweulkwra pwhraopls
waf peufrpbg at pafg pwraoez-s;
a tkphaor tpapb hupls

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

Each stanza a perfect haiku!

Each stanza a perfect haiku! but i must profess my ignorance, in what language is its mirror? Love, Anna "You begin saving the world by saving one person at a time; all else is grandiose romanticism or politics." Charles Bukowski
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barbsdad2003

16 years 11 months ago

I'm so glad ...

you asked. It is in English, actually, but written in the language of machine steno. Thanks. And hugs, Chuck
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 11 months ago

Machine steno? Good Lord

Machine steno? Good Lord man, I've got ANOTHER language to learn in my old(er) age? BTW did you make the rackety-coon a permanent house guest? S/he seems to have eyes fro you. ;-) ~A "You begin saving the world by saving one person at a time; all else is grandiose romanticism or politics." Charles Bukowski
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bjp

16 years 11 months ago

Dear Charles,

I took the machine steno verses to be metaphors for the internal sorting you must do to get to English. I found this to be a very powerful method of symbolizing the task. Brian
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Haiku Warrior

Chuck ... Damn it ! lol ...I always think you cant surprise me and then I see this ... OMG I think you are one of the best writers of haiku here at neopoet ... I love them , I so wish i could write them as you do , but then they wouldn't be yours and I wouldnt get the pleasure of reading them lol much love Jayne hugz x x Bugger , forgot the stars ... lol :P ok they they there now
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 11 months ago

Loved the little interludes

from insanity, they were highlighted by the eindhytytyt ri being so different, like the clearing of mist here and there pciking out particular little thoughts, it is a very different effect. You have me pwaogspweulkwra pwhraopls! Help! Ann of Norway
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barbsdad2003

16 years 10 months ago

Ann of Norway

What? Do you suggest you're having a bit of trouble with the pronunciation of pwaogspweulkwra pwhraopls? Regards, Chuck
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 10 months ago

"Get out of here"

Not a bit of it, IF I get in the bath upside down, put my toes in my mouth, stick lollipops in my ears and sing La Marseilles then and only then do I THINK that I have understood. What was it again? "Get out of here" as they say! Yours Ann fra Noreg
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 10 months ago

Chuck

First of all, I can't stop reading your poetry. Second, The responses you get are almost as fun as the poem. Third, the mystery of the second language is solved. And fourth, 'words picked well arrive anemic; they may suggest … colors but cannot — cannot create a rainbow' words so very very true. Deelilah