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Jun 10, 2009
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Springs revival
All of earth awakes
Spring begins to yawn,
Plumes of breath exhaled
In the light of dawn.
Underneath the oak tree
In ferns of wetted green
Young deer forage
After winter’s lean.
Tattered velvet antlers,
Bucks sniff the air,
Baby fawn staggers
Doe's stand and stare.
Bushy tails and whiskers
In pelts of brown and grey
Sleepy liquid eyes
Pierce the light of day.
Icy grip is over
Winter hasn’t won
Nature is revived
By the fingers of the sun.
— mand, Jun 10, 2009
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Fleur MacDonald
16 years 11 months ago
this is just a
mand
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Fleur
Candlewitch
15 years 12 months ago
Dear Mand
mand
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Cat, glad you enjoyed
shirley harrison
15 years 12 months ago
Dear Mand
mand
15 years 12 months ago
Nice to see you Shirl, I