WOODEN NICKELS

I am so stupid sometimes [ and I will say this for you because you are thinking this already ] Son how many time have I said slow down check your spelling there is no reason for a good poem to be a bad poem for one misspelled word . reading your response [ No propose (No purpose) Dang man,] . Brings this home for me .I remember what you said about how the brain works . You said that [ sometimes people will have a hard time with grammar but are probably good in math and science and that is so true in my case . So let me tell you what I am starting to see. Mathematical equations in my poetry to make my poems flow better from line to line. This is what I see ? even tho a poem is writing in words , those words are made by sounds and tones. This is were the math comes into the flow [ NOW I KNOW THAT ALL POETRY DOSE NOT HAVE TO RHYME ]But Mathematical equation of a song in words in my poetry is my style. In my case I don't want the reader to pause ! maybe to look up what a words means or to have to really think about what a poem is saying. I have no desire to challenge a readers mind. I want my poetry to be like your favorite song to all that can't sing or all that can't play and instrument. OK so far I have seen two equation in rhyming I am still working on them . But they are simply a count of sounds and tones in a poem line by line a rhythm there is a Mathematical equation to it Love to you dad [G]